Friday, April 9, 2010

The Looks

This morning I got some steaks and string and placed the steaks into the ground of how my ramp would turn out.


1 comment:

  1. You're getting three English grades on your blogs. I need to see more specifics, better word choice, and paragraphs detailing what your accomplishing. Above all, write in complete sentences.

    You might also want to consider scanning documents and uploading them on your Blog to provide a visual for your accomplishments.

    1.3 Use descriptive language that clarifies and enhances ideas (word choice).

    1.4 Demonstrate correct spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and knowledge of grammar/usage appropriate for grade level (conventions).

    1.5 Use varied sentence structures and openings to enhance clarity and to support meaning (sentence fluency). Use transition words between sentences and paragraphs (and so, because, next, after that, however, because, etc.)

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